Better job on music in the background. Looks like you're wearing a lapel mic, if so, great, but the vocals are still hard to hear.
That, and like someone else pointed out, get better targets. Those are REALLY cheap and tearing vs. getting clean holes.
Good improvement in the video.
Still a hi-point..... :P
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* A word on Internet Tough Guy Syndrome - Everyone on TGT has it. Even the most revered TXARGUY has it. The Syndrome is like a virus. Some people, the first group, are carriers, you never really see the symptoms in them personally but somehow they have a talent for spreading it to those around them. Others, the second group, are fully infected by the virus and it shows in pretty much everything they bang out on their keyboard. Those fully infected individuals tend to eventually be noticed and quarantined through being ignored by other less symptomatic members, shunned and ostracized by the group (which tends to increase the symptoms of the fully infected individual leading to many LMAOs), and eventual ban from the forum (which typically is simply a temporary inoculation for the forum in general but does nothing to treat the infection in the individual). And yet others, the third group into which the majority of TGT including TXARGUY fits, are fully infected but in remission most of the time. Individuals in this third group will be looked upon for advice, be seen as pretty good guys and will be pretty laid back. Most of the time. But, sometimes the infection gets the best of them and comes roaring back with a vengeance leaving much Butthurt and WTFs in its wake. These relapse periods can last anywhere from a few minutes to a few days but eventually remission sets back in and the group moves on. So, it is important to your Internet video creation and interaction goals that you understand Internet Tough Guy Syndrome, it's symptoms, and that we are ALL infected with it in one stage (group) or another...
I don't want to watch the back of your head. If you can't show the gun then zoom on the target.
profound thinking about stuff